Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Innocence

When I look in their eyes
I see that it's gone
By no fault of their own
they've been preyed upon

That look or that manner
sees into their past
Shows knowledge of damage
in youth lost too fast

5 comments:

Elizabeth Ann said...

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Madison said...

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Saru Singhal said...

Beautiful selection of words. Nice to see how brilliantly you said everything in few words.

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Jeswyn said...

seems really subtle with words.....good going :)

baresoul said...

I like this, short and sweet
i just started blogging other day

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